Clarifying and Condensing
Hulu is the first-ever TV streaming service to offer Venmo as a payment option for a subscription
Users who have a Venmo account can sign up for a new Hulu account on a mobile Web browser and select Venmo as their payment option. Their Venmo balance or linked payment method will be used for their monthly recurring subscription.
Existing Hulu subscribers can switch payment preferences to Venmo, too. A modal was designed for this, but someone stuck a weird line of unnecessary copy into it.
"You will be directed to Venmo after clicking on the Finish at Venmo button below."
Let's clean that up using what I call the "Charmin Ultra Principle"
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Less is more.
- Charmin Ultra Bears